My Analytical Expository Essay
The
Negative Effects of Staying Up Late
Staying
up late is a common thing in our life. Many people stay up late because of
working, studying, or just watching TV. As it is known, the human body needs 8 hours for sleeping each
day. After spending the days, we need to rest our body to re-energize energy. When
we wake up after having less sleeping time, we may feel tired or may feel just
fine, but do you know that staying up late is not good for health? Staying up
late can cause health problems in human life.
First,
staying up late can cause gain weight. Lack
of sleep relates
with increased hunger and appetite. If people have litle time to sleep they will feel
hungry and need more food after waking up. Not only staying up can stimulate
the appetite, but also it can cause the desire to eat a lot of high-fat and high-calories foods. A doctoral candidate at the university of
Pennsylvania, Andrea. M Spaeth, MA, said in an article on womenshealthmag.com
that the longer people stay awake, the more time
they have to eat. Because staying up late increasing hunger in human body, that
is why people often chose high-fat and high-calories food to satisfy their
hunger. As it is known, high-fat and high-calories foods are the
foods that have more affect in gaining weight.
Second, staying up late can cause insomnia. Sleepfoundation.org
clarifies that according to guidelines from a physician group, insomnia is a
difficulty to fall asleep, even when a person has the chance to do it. If
people
keep on
staying up late every day, it can change their sleeping habit.
For instance, when
they
want to sleep early, they
will have trouble because they are already accustomed to stay up late.
In addition,
their
body is adjusting their
habits of
staying up, so
it takes too long
time to go to their habit of going to bed in early time.
Third, staying up late can cause headache which damage
the brain. Every
time people
stay up late, they
may wake up
in the morning with a feeling of panic and
hast. These feeling can cause headache. If this situation occurs for
many times, consequently, it will cause a minor
concussion that can damage the brain. In www.passionmagz.com says that Dr. Messoud Ashina from University of Copenhagen had reseached about the relation between headache and
brain. The result of his research is headache can damage the brain by changing its structures.
In
conclusion, staying up late has negative effects for human health. It can cause
gain weight because of increased hunger and appetite. Also it
can cause insomnia by changing the sleeping habit. Then it also cause headache
which damage the brain.
Sinta, your essay is good, but it is better for you to change the 8 figure with letter. Type eight not 8.
BalasHapusyour essay is nice, but in the third sentence at the second paragraph, you need to put a comma after a dependent clause.
BalasHapussinta your essay is good, but in the last paragraph i think there a little confused sentence, there so many using the word"also"'. so you must change it
BalasHapusI think in the concluding paragraph, you should add some ideas to develop your conclusion be better.
BalasHapussinta, as we know from Mr. Saunir in the 2nd semester, in academic writing, we should avoid the word "we" or "our", etc. you can use the word "people" or someone".
BalasHapussinta I think you must change foods not "s" food
BalasHapus"the foods that have more affect in gaining weight"
it is better for you, to put the question at first.. :)
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